tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-41548026353434064572024-02-18T17:33:05.857-08:00T2-54: Thriller Opening 2010/11Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-92119353530241659762011-03-21T03:20:00.000-07:002011-03-21T03:20:21.970-07:00individual feedback on our footagepositives- the use of editing overall was good especially the slow motion and credits.<br />
- good use of effects<br />
- good use of slow motions<br />
- the sound fits well<br />
- good shots<br />
-good effects on titles<br />
- shot types and content<br />
-titles are well thought about<br />
- the shot through the trees<br />
- empathetic music<br />
- was emotional gripping, tense, confusing, realistic well filmed, well edited, well acted.<br />
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negative- the music didn't fit in as well as it could have sounded more like action than thriller.<br />
- sound doesnt fit<br />
- music could be more tense<br />
- sounds more like action<br />
- more variety of shots could be added<br />
- creditsLong Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-60858505797300333072011-03-17T08:24:00.000-07:002011-03-17T08:24:03.456-07:00Final Cut<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><iframe allowfullscreen='allowfullscreen' webkitallowfullscreen='webkitallowfullscreen' mozallowfullscreen='mozallowfullscreen' width='320' height='266' src='https://www.blogger.com/video.g?token=AD6v5dywlegvBMqNxgPDhLAmXBWI43SuqTmUknRVNfPt0YcY2kFlL9wM2d3IGqUL3u5l8YBYclrQNtx9kEKaB0hcKg' class='b-hbp-video b-uploaded' frameborder='0'></iframe></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br />
</div>This is our final version of the film and we are very pleased with how it has turned out.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-76125171730765998672011-03-10T07:58:00.000-08:002011-03-10T07:58:05.996-08:00what we have learnt from feedbackTo improve our shots we will make the opening clearer and have more shots of the person in the bed to show that he is sleeping we will also add sound to make the antagonists point of view more understandable.<br />
steady shots will also help to improve the quality of the filming, use a tripod when needed.<br />
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From T2-50 the steady shots held when the character was moving, ie when getting in his bed was effective it gives a clear image of the mise-en-scene.<br />
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We agreed with most of the feedback but some was unnecessary because we made it clear that we still need to ad sound and with the sound, the clip will obviously be clearer and identify different points of view.<br />
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Next week we will need to get some extra filming on the home scene and re film the part where Ben comes out of the elevator in a more steady shot using a tripod.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-28709516794802540702011-03-10T07:43:00.000-08:002011-03-10T07:43:00.225-08:00T2-49 commentsThe shot at the beginning of the bed wasn't clear whether there was a person in it or not, but otherwise the opening made sense and was well filmed. The addition of sound would increase the difference between the two points of view, when the camera was zoomed in on the person on the filed it was very shaky so it became hard to tell where the person was. The slow-motion section was jumpy but it fitted the mood of the opening.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-88404600468773341992011-03-10T07:35:00.000-08:002011-03-10T07:35:37.103-08:00T2-50We weren't entierly sure what was happening during the opening but this could be due to the way the film was layed out.<br />
The use of the slow motion was good.<br />
There was a good use of different shot types and shot distances which made it more interesting to watch.<br />
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We also thought that the use of black and white filters was good as it helped create a mood.<br />
Sound needs to be added to help create the mood so that it is more interesting and doesn't just rely on the colour to create the mood.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-50882008672659799152011-03-10T07:21:00.000-08:002011-03-10T07:26:13.630-08:00Feedback from Group T2-51<ul><li>The use of slow motion was good and added emphasis to the plot</li>
<li>Sound needs to be worked on to set the mood and allow the audience to understand the plot</li>
<li>Dull colours were good however we were unaware whether you were using colour or black and white (sorry if that was due to the camera quality)</li>
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The way the footage was filmed and the way it was edited as well as the colour was really good and made it even more interesting.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-26924287976597581452011-03-10T07:03:00.000-08:002011-03-10T07:03:58.762-08:00Feedback from Group T2-53- You can clearly see that the narrative centres around a crime/murder as there are dead bodies.<br />
- The use of different shots help to manipulate the perspectives which is a main theme in thriller films.<br />
-The titles are simple but effective in associating with the narrative.<br />
- The narrative represents an ordinary situation in which extraordinary things happen- e.g walking through school to find dead people on the floor.<br />
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In order to improve you need to add music which helps to create atmosphere which links to the storyline.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-15569189584928927742011-03-09T04:15:00.000-08:002011-03-09T04:15:23.211-08:00rough cut<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><iframe allowfullscreen='allowfullscreen' webkitallowfullscreen='webkitallowfullscreen' mozallowfullscreen='mozallowfullscreen' width='320' height='266' src='https://www.blogger.com/video.g?token=AD6v5dzhMq4K_ChvLKOP_SZIwwWbzrqt_S3yL0WrAl5oDlj7vgKcEdPEhyowOs9geFdbzFHt-HHrLqsomXQs0JOpFw' class='b-hbp-video b-uploaded' frameborder='0'></iframe></div>We need to add sound.<br />
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The audience may not understand the concept of the opening sequence as it has no sound to it. The sound should help identify the idea of it being a dream and will create an atmosphere that relates to the genre.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-64378794567113828832011-03-07T01:41:00.000-08:002011-03-07T01:41:23.564-08:00End of FilmingThis week we finished the filming for our thriller. In the last lesson we filmed the shots of the dead bodies in the D block with other students from our class as the bodies. On Thursday night Ben took the camera home and filmed the final shot of the film in his bedroom. In today's lesson we are cutting our shots together for the rough cut deadline on Wednesday.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-36815012363035968532011-03-02T04:10:00.000-08:002011-03-03T06:57:36.666-08:00Sound Analysis<b>Analyse a clip from the Descent.</b><br />
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<b>1) Watch the clip without the sound, what effect do the images have on you? How does it make you feel?</b><br />
<b><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: normal;">The scene is set in a very dark and wet cave probably underground and so there is a very frightening and tense atmosphere. Suspense is built throughout the scene as the characters are only partially lit and are surrounded by darkness so we wonder what is round them and what could be hidden in the darkness.</span></b><br />
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<b><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: normal;"><b><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: normal;"><b>2) Now watch the clip with the sound. What is the difference in the impact the images now have? how does the sound add to atmosphere and feelings?</b></span></b></span></b><br />
The sound is as would be expected and has the constant sound of diegetic rain or running water. There is also lots of dialogue where the characters are clearly scared and distressed. As tension grows throughout the scene non-diegetic sound is used to make it clear something is going to happen and to build suspense. When finally something jumps out there is a loud noise and the characters scream and splash in the water and so more diegtic sound effects are used.<br />
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<b>3) How has this task affected your view of the importance of sound? What type of feeling will you try and encourage you audience to have through your sound?</b><br />
After watching this clip it is clear to me that sound effects can make it more obvious what genre a film may fall in. The use of sound is also very important in creating suspense and tension. When adding sound to our film we will try and use these techniques to build suspense in the appropriate places and to make it more realistic.<br />
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Today -Update blog, maybe start sound<br />
Tomorrow - finish filming within building (D block, lifts) and lying down scene, edit them in order<br />
Tomorrow (evening) - film bed scene<br />
Friday - bring camera back 9amLong Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-34963551031510773772011-03-02T03:04:00.000-08:002011-03-02T03:04:24.473-08:00Coursework DeadlinesMonday 7th 9am - Filming Deadline<br />
Wednesday 9th 12:20pm - Rough Cut Deadline<br />
Thursday 10th - Watching each others Rough Cut, offering advice etc.<br />
Wednesday 16th 12:20pm - Final Cut Deadline<br />
Monday 21st 9am - Draft Evaluation due in via emailLong Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-67762218183295544672011-02-16T03:57:00.000-08:002011-02-16T03:57:35.780-08:00First day filmingWe began filming today and managed to get some perfect shots of clouds in the sky due to good weather. We only recorded some of the shots we need as we could ot use our whole cast in this lesson. We will film the remaining shots we need later on and will begin editing what we have already recorded. As well as filming some exterior shots we also filmed the lift in D block. We are extremely pleased with the shots of the clouds and sky we have filmed.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-25671829836300675142011-02-14T02:25:00.000-08:002011-03-02T03:08:28.637-08:00Top Tips for Filming<ul><li>Take script and description of shots with you at all times</li>
<li>Always check the location before using it</li>
<li>Always carry a backup plan for anything that might go wrong</li>
<li>Know how to use the camera</li>
<li>Check if characters are available before using them</li>
<li>Plan out what you will film on what day and time</li>
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<div>The film would particularly appeal to male teens who are interested in 'gaming' as the film has a gory story line similar to popular games.</div><div>The film may also attract a younger audience because the cast are also young and so the feelings and themes are easy to relate to and more relevant to the audience. </div><div>Our film's name 'Envisage' is quite similar to 'Disturbia' and makes the mind wonder what the film may involve and so may attract the same kind of audience. </div><br />
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The opening sequence to Seven shows a few of the thriller conventions.<br />
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At the beginning, we discover the main character (Morgan Freeman) who is also the lead detective. This also shows the audience who the protagonist is.<br />
We also see that the focus is on the crime which Freeman is investigating in the flat with the two other detectives. Also in this scene, Freeman becomes isolated when he starts talking about other details which aren't linked to the crime and the other detectives ask him what he's talking about. The fact he talks about unrelated details could be a weakness of Freeman's character.<br />
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When Brad Pitt is introduced, there is instantly a binary opposite between him and Freeman. This is because Freeman is older, wiser, organised, and he's seen a lot whilst working as a detective. Unlike Pitt who is younger, messy, unorganised, and has a cocky attitude about him. We can tell Freeman is more organised than Pitt by looking at the mise-en-scene. Freeman's costume is neater than Pitts, this is shown because Pitts' costume is messy and looks unorganised unlike Freeman's.<br />
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Sound is important to the opening clip because it builds suspense from an early stage of the film. The opening credits build suspense with the music because the music has a dark abnormal tone, which could raise questions for the audience. Just after this, the music builds more suspense again when the detectives are searching through the house/crime scene.<br />
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There is a mature and highly regarded cast for this film, and this is shown by the fact that the two main characters are Morgan Freeman and Brad Pitt.<br />
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To make the setting seem realistic, they base the story in a city.<br />
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The titles convey to the audience unanswered questions, and this is good for the audience because it gets them thinking about the plot and what may happen in the film itself. Also, we are introduced to the main character, Morgan Freeman, in the titles.<br />
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Going back to the micro elements, the lighting in the crime scene footage is effective for the audience because it gives us a sense of claustrophobia by the fact that it's a small, dark, gloomy room which is difficult to see in. Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-72528175918574807462011-02-14T01:37:00.000-08:002011-02-14T01:37:30.573-08:00analysing past students video<u>Marking Criteria</u><br />
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- Holding a shot steady, where appropriate<br />
- Framing a shot including and excluding elements<br />
- Using a variety of shot distances as appropriate<br />
- Shooting material appropriate to the task<br />
- Selecting mise-en-scene including colour, figure, lighting etc.<br />
- Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer<br />
- Using varied shot transitions and effects<br />
- Using sound with images<br />
- Using titles appropriately<br />
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This clip was enjoyable to watch because of the effectiveness of the micro elements used. The shot where they were filming the news reporter was very accurate to news which we actually see on TV. This is due to the fact they hold the shot steady. They frame the shot including the important elements which relate to what they're talking about, which is the news reporter and the setting of the terrorist attack. This is helpful to the audience because it gives a rough idea of where the situation at hand is happening. There were a variety of shot distances and angles which determined the position of characters, for example, where the antagonists were running around the building, they were shown at a low angle with a close up, this is significant to the viewer because it shows who's in control, and at this point, it's the antagonists.This is the same as the hostages, they're shown at a mid shot, which shows the audience the amount of hostages. The material within the clip is all appropriate to the task because it shows a sophisticated plot. The plot is that twenty-one hostages need rescuing. Although the plot is given away so early, it is effective for the audience because it gets them thinking how they're going to save the hostages. The mise-en-scene is really effective in this clip, especially the colour. This is where it cuts from the news to the hostage scene. The news is in colour and in daylight, whereas the action scenes of the clip were in black and white. I found this effective because it could convey the idea of what could be that they're doing it like a split screen, where they show the news report footage, opposed to the scenes on black and white. They also edited the shots really well so the storyline made sense to the audience, and they done this by cutting from the news report part then showing the bits in black and white, and this was good because it made the footage more fluent. This is because the news reporter would explain to the audience what was happening, then the black and white scenes would show what he was talking about.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-76022787065553803622011-02-14T01:18:00.000-08:002011-03-03T06:58:45.559-08:00Conventions of Sub Genres<u>Psychological</u><br />
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Unusual happenings - extraordinary<br />
Misleading story - plot twists/tricks<br />
Clever character - thinking ahead of everyone else<br />
Isolated character<br />
Film works up to a final shocking reveal<br />
Characters have a fascination or fear of death<br />
Danger on a mental level rather than a physical level<br />
Characters try and find their own purpose<br />
Characters in conflict with their mind - they don't know what is true<br />
2 or more characters preying on each others sanity<br />
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<u>E</u><u>xample of a Psychological thriller</u><br />
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Memento directed by Christopher Nolan<br />
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Throughout the clip we saw, the main convention which was highly noticeable was the fact that the main character is isolated from the other characters. This is because he has a bad condition of memory loss which alienates him and makes him weak and vulnerable. The main character has a fascination, or obsession with his wife's death, and he is determined to avenge her. Also, the main character has conflict with his own mind due to his memory loss, and this causes repetition of him killing people who h suspects killed his wife, and he won't stop until he finds the real killer. In this film, there is quite a mature cast of characters, this is because the director is common for types of films like this. The plot is non linear which means it is quite difficult to understand because it of the flashback's in nearly every scene, and this can confuse the audience. They probably did this so the audience can relate to the main character's feelings of memory loss, so us as the audience can get a better understanding of what he is like.<br />
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<u>Political </u><br />
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Uses many locations - often focuses on different cultures or countries<br />
'False Heroes' - characters we think are good who are revealed not to be<br />
'Helper' - character who provides the protagonist with something useful<br />
Threat is set against a backdrop of political power struggle<br />
Plots are designed to give political power to someone while opponents try and prevent this<br />
Innocent people drawn into the political world<br />
Trying to prove innocence<br />
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<u>Action </u><br />
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More screen time main characters - protagonist, helps the audience relate to the characters<br />
High position of authority - usually the antagonist, "false heroes"<br />
Location change<br />
Introduced to characters without fully knowing <br />
Nothing developed straight away<br />
Isolated character<br />
Not knowing anything/unknown plot<br />
Don't get the reason with fights and chases<br />
Antagonist - group<br />
= Protagonist outnumbered<br />
Protagonist - one<br />
Variety of characters<br />
Organised (OCD level)<br />
Isolate themselves<br />
Normal setting<br />
Violence - innocent people dying<br />
Usually family issues<br />
Variety of locations<br />
Weakness<br />
Clues<br />
Family issues<br />
Mature cast - expensive budget<br />
Protagonist has talent - athletic<br />
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<u>Crime</u><br />
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More screen time for the main character<br />
Basic locations<br />
Protagonist vulnerable due to family (also creates a driving force)<br />
Crime being planned<br />
Mysterious music - build tension<br />
Binary opposite<br />
Based on protagonist<br />
Suspension music<br />
Young adult cast<br />
Older cast turn up<br />
Protagonist introduced<br />
No antagonist yet<br />
Protagonist has issue<br />
Misleading narrative<br />
Opposite sex distraction<br />
Randomly killing people<br />
Isolated crime sceneLong Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-82379106097399740172011-02-10T08:01:00.000-08:002011-03-02T03:10:16.835-08:00Test Footage<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><iframe allowfullscreen='allowfullscreen' webkitallowfullscreen='webkitallowfullscreen' mozallowfullscreen='mozallowfullscreen' width='320' height='266' src='https://www.blogger.com/video.g?token=AD6v5dzU4v1r7yAlRCkHo42vShMoxziIB0XC7F0oKE_6Bf8UQI9sH9tHIkbgo76KoZqKLQcbU6m0yzMd615cTroqMw' class='b-hbp-video b-uploaded' frameborder='0'></iframe> </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br />
</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">These shots are some of the basic shots that will be used in the opening sequence.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">The correct props aren't included in this clip because of the weather.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">There is a variety of shots used to portray different things and atmospheres</div>Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-73250928179227116662011-02-09T04:01:00.000-08:002011-02-09T04:12:53.936-08:00Class Feedback of Childrens Film<div style="text-align: center;"><u><b>Positives</b></u></div><ul><li>Good choice of camera shot types</li>
<li>Well edited</li>
<li>Good choice of music</li>
</ul><div style="text-align: center;"><u><b>Negatives</b></u></div><ul><li>Some shots badly positioned </li>
<li>Unsteady hand on some points</li>
<li>Dialogue quiet on some parts</li>
</ul><u><b>How to make improvements</b></u><br />
<ul><li>Use a tripod more effectively to ensure all shots are steady</li>
<li>Make sure we capture all dialogue well when filming</li>
<li>Plan our shots better before filming</li>
<li>Spend more time editing after filming</li>
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The titles we made looked very professional and also fitted well with the genre.<br />
We used a wide variety of different shot distances including long shots, mid shots and close ups which also worked well.<br />
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</div><div style="text-align: center;"> <u><b>Negative Feedback</b></u></div>I think we should have included a wider variety of shots in our film as it would create a more proffesional looking film and be more interesting to watch.<br />
We also could have improved our editiing techniues as I don't think the fact that 'Peter' is invisible is immediately obvious.<br />
We could have also added more interesting effects and shot transitions to make the film more interesting to watch.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-49094735776557369642011-02-09T03:31:00.000-08:002011-02-09T04:09:04.930-08:00childrens film evaluation<u>positives-</u><br />
<div style="background-color: lime;">conversation editing</div><div style="background-color: lime;">the use of special effects</div>good background<br />
Good use of photoshop<br />
Good mise-en-scene<br />
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<u>Negatives </u><br />
random black scene<br />
<div style="background-color: red;">continuity editing is poor</div>body parts are missing<br />
<div style="background-color: red;">sound missing and isn't empathetic</div>Editing of people<br />
More titles. More detail<br />
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</div><div style="background-color: white; color: lime;"> green -happy about </div><div style="background-color: white; color: red;">red - not happy about</div><div style="background-color: white; color: red;"><br />
</div><div style="background-color: white; color: red;"><span style="color: black;">How can we improve on our negatives?</span></div><div style="background-color: white; color: red;"><br />
</div><div style="background-color: white; color: red;"><span style="color: black;">We can improve on our negatives by planning our tine so we have enough time to make sure the editing is more fluent and that the sound matches the images. </span> </div>Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-3454257008139029282011-02-07T02:23:00.000-08:002011-02-07T02:23:20.635-08:00Shot List and Storyboard<u>Shot List</u><br />
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<span id="goog_219928899"></span><span id="goog_219928900"></span>Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4154802635343406457.post-32220677799373797762011-02-07T02:13:00.000-08:002011-02-07T02:13:51.317-08:00Notes on Amar's presentationscript writing<br />
story boarding<br />
test shooting<br />
shooting<br />
editing<br />
............................. layers build throughout each stage<br />
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don't rely on memory > write down ideas in a simple way<br />
divide script into locations<br />
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EXT (exterior e.g. car park)<br />
INT (interior e.g bedroom)<br />
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find locations nd diagnose problems<br />
make notes on what you see and hear<br />
always have a shot list and a script < annotate it include INT and EXT<br />
identify props/ costumes helps edit process<br />
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shooting schedule<br />
organize day and time<br />
what restrictions do you have?<br />
if organized you can shoot on time and possibly shoot more.<br />
more options when editing<br />
print off any notes or any of the work above and carry with you at all times.Long Road Thriller 2011http://www.blogger.com/profile/09692501379226653980noreply@blogger.com0