what we have learnt from feedback

To improve our shots we will make the opening clearer and have more shots of the person in the bed to show that he is sleeping we will also add sound to make the antagonists point of view more understandable.
steady shots will also help to improve the quality of the filming, use a tripod when needed.

From T2-50 the steady shots held when the character was moving, ie when getting in his bed was effective  it gives a clear image of the mise-en-scene.

We agreed with most of the feedback but some was unnecessary  because we made it clear that we still need to ad sound and with the sound, the clip will obviously be clearer and identify different points of view.

Next week we will need to get some extra filming on the home scene and re film the part where Ben comes out of the elevator in a more steady shot using a tripod.