Feedback from Group T2-53

- You can clearly see that the narrative centres around a crime/murder as there are dead bodies.
- The use of different shots help to manipulate the perspectives which is a main theme in thriller films.
-The titles are simple but effective in associating with the narrative.
- The narrative represents an ordinary situation in which extraordinary things happen- e.g walking through school to find dead people on the floor.

In order to improve you need to add music which helps to create atmosphere which links to the storyline.